Your (my) characters are either going to DO something, or not DO something. If they are in mid-act of something, maybe it doesn’t need to be written about.
I waste a lot of time with the above words – my time and my reader’s time. So with my next novel I’m working even harder to banish useless fodder.
Again, I hate endless internet banter on rules of writing. But I’m aiming to make my stories read better, faster, with less junk to slow down what I’m working so hard to get across.
And don’t forget to support my endeavors!
A Dangerous Kind of Girl is now out on ebook and paperback. *Amazon has the wrong cover displayed. Their system takes centuries to update even though I made a mistake.
Or just go to Smashwords.